▼ 原因素材

1．经济的发展

economic development/enhancement/advancement

The economy has been developed/improved.

经济可持续发展 sustainable development of economy

2．科技进步

technology development/enhancement/advancement

3．人口数量多

large population base; larger number of population

The population has increased.

4．生活水平提高

high-level living standard

The living standard has been raised/improved/enhanced

5．人民更加富裕

rich/wealthy people/folk

The folk/people/citizen are growing richer.

The folk/people/citizen’s wallet is growing fat.

6．消费能力提高

high consuming ability/power

The power of consuming has been enhanced/improved.

7． 消费观念发生变化

the alteration of consumption idea

the shift of notion of consumption

The consumption idea/notion of consumption has been changed/altered/shifted.

8．时代变了

The age/time/year/era has been changed/altered/shifted.

The age/time/year/era is different.

9．经济形势变化

the shift/alteration/change of economic situation/circumstance

The economic situation/circumstance has been changed/altered/shifted.

10．政策支持/反对

policy support/opposition; policy consent/objection

The policy favors sth.

There is policy support/opposition.

11．产品价格下降/上升

low/high price of product

The price of product has dropped/has been cut.

The product runs cheaper.

12．沟通方式发生变化

the alteration/shift of the way/means of communication

Our era has witnessed the alteration/shift of the way/means of communication.

The way/means of communication has been altered/shifted/changed.

13．市场需求发生变化

the alteration/shift of market requirement/demand

Market requirement/demand has been altered/shifted.

14．交通便利

convenient traffic; developed transportation

15．性价比提高

high performance cost ratio

highly cost effective

The cost performance of sth. is raised/high/enhanced.

16．产品种类丰富

various kinds of products

a variety of products

17．产品质量提高

high-quality product

The product quality has been improved.

18．激烈的竞争

fierce/intense competition

19．质量问题

quality problem

The products/sth. have/has quality problem.

20．销售策略的影响

the impact of marketing strategies/tactics

sth. is/are influenced/impacted by marketing strategies/tactics.

21．产品无优势

no product superiority

The product possesses no superiority.

22．目标不清楚/不同

obscure/dim/different target/aim

23．不知道自己的需求

sb. is/are unclear about his/her/their personal demand.

sb. have/has no idea about his/her/their personal demand.

24．缺乏计划

sb. is short of/lacks plan for sth./doing sth..

25．缺乏社会经验

sb. is socially inexperienced.

sb. lacks social experience.

26．收入少

low income

sb. belongs to low-income group/earners.

27．压力大/小

low/high pressure/stress

sb. are/is stressed out.

28．无法实现自我价值

sb. cannot realize his self-value.

29．缺乏进取心

sb. is not aggressive.

sb. has/have weak enterprising spirit.

sb. is/are lack/full（充满） of enterprising spirit.

30．期待与现实的差距

the gap between expectation and reality

There is/are/exist(s) a gap between sb’s expectation and reality.

31．生活稳定

stable life

sb. live(s) a stable life.

32．生活态度不同

different life attitude

sb. have/has a different attitude towards life.

33．社保体系完善

sound social security system

The government has built a sound social security system.

34．业余时间多/少

sb. have/has less/more spare time.

sb. can spare more/less time after school/work.

35．缺乏知识/能力

sb. is/are short of knowledge/ability to do sth.

sb. is/are not capable of doing sth.

36．有/无工作需求/找工作

sb. need/do(es) not need to work.

There is (no) need for sb. to work/hunt a job.

37．工作目标不明确

unclear/vague work objective/goal

38．人口转移

population transfer from to

39．工作机会多

various job opportunities

There exist various job opportunities.

40．教育资源丰富

abundant/adequate educational resources

There are abundant/adequate educational resources.

41．医疗体系健全

sound health care system

There is a sound health care system + 地点.

42．公共设施完善

sound social infrastructure

There is a sound social infrastructure +地点.

43．吸引

attract, appeal, tempt, lure

44．生活丰富多彩

colorful life

sb. can live a more colorful life +地点.

45．耕地减少

Farm land is lessened/reduced/decreased.

46．传统观念

traditional convention/custom

47．美好祝愿

good/best wishes

48．生活环境单调

monotonous/boring living environment

sb. live(s) in a monotonous living environment.

补充：

好的社会风气：good general mood of society

可持续性发展：sustainable development of

个人成长：personal growth

身心健康：our personal mental and physical health

和谐稳定：social harmony and stability

生态平衡：ecological balance

经济发展：economic development

科技进步：technology development/advances

文化交流：cultural exchanges

Technology development improved the product quality

政策漏洞：There are policy bugs/no effective/no strict regulations on sth/doing sth

监管不到：Authorities concerned/The local administration bureau exercise weak supervision/inadequate supervision on sth/doing sth.

不良社会风气：Undesirable general mood of society should shoulder the blame, such as gradual loss of mutual trust/sense of social responsibility/ basic ethics /morality/conscience,

egoism, credibility problem, distorted value towards life, and its like/etc. (such as 之后的内容可选择)

激烈的竞争：sb wish to escape from heavy economic pressure/fierce competition/ pressure of school learning/pressure of job hunting.

沉溺于经济利益/名誉/短期增长或发展/个人的舒适和利益：

sb. are obsessed/preoccupied with economic benefits/fame/short-term growth and development/one’s own comfort and benefits.

过于关注经济效益而忽视社会效益：

We tend to be obsessed with economic benefits but neglect social interests.

不恰当的教育理念：People/School haven’t realized disastrous consequences of inappropriate notion of education, individuals/people/young adults/students/university graduates(人) failing to form a right view of life/moral value/life value.

求同思维：

Owing to convergent thinking, individuals/people/young adults/students/university graduates(人) easily neglect their own opinion and are always/commonly impelled by the tendency to follow the crowd and drift with the current.

缺乏自我约束：

lack of/lacking self-discipline constitutes one of the primary reason for this issue/this phenomenon/this problem.

▼ 原因功能句

第二段第二句：原因引导句（八选一）：

1. Careful deliberation of this trend has illuminated me on why this should be so. +万能成因

2. There are several driving forces behind this trend. +万能成因

3. A possible/convincing reason for this issue/this phenomenon/this problem is that+万能成因

4. One plausible/ convincing explanation for this issue/this phenomenon/this problem is that+万能成因

5. Many factors could contribute to this issue/this phenomenon/this problem, but one deserves special mention:+万能成因

6. Numerous factors could account for this phenomenon rend.

7. Primary reasons of this issue/this phenomenon/this problem can be listed as follows. +万能成因

8. A couple of numerous reasons contribute to this issue/this phenomenon/this problem. +万能成因

第三句：第一个原因

In the first place/to begin with/firstly/for one thing+名词+constitutes one of the primary reasons for+主题词/this issue/phenomenon/problem.

名词+accounts for +主题词/this phenomenon

Perhaps the main/primary/fundamental reason is+名词或短语/that从句

We should not neglect/ignore/disregard/overlook that 原因短语 makes the main contribution for+主题词/this issue/problem/phenomenon.

例子：

Careful deliberation of this trend has illuminated me on why this should be so. In the first place, economic development constitutes one of the primary reasons for this phenomenon.

第四句：改写题目支撑第三句

That’s why +句子

the situation about A is like so.

As a result, +句子

the situation/fact about A is not hard to understand/ is determined as it is.

The above reason illustrates why +句子

the situation about A is so/should be so.

例子：

Careful deliberation of this trend has illuminated me on why this should be so. In the first place, economic development constitutes one of the primary reasons for this phenomenon. That’s why the percentage of private owned houses was increased.

第五句：第二个原因

In the second place/ in addition/additionally, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover,

此外

this phenomenon/issue/problem/matter would inevitably involve+名词

we must admit that+句子

the fact cannot be ignored that+句子

第六句：举例说明第二个原因

（1）According to a survey made by+机构名称，

In terms of a data issued by+机构名称，

（以上内容二选一）

（2）机构名称：

China Daily /the World Health Organization(WHO)/ United Nation Educational Scientific and CultureOrganization(UNESCO)/International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources(IUCN)/Sina/ National Bureau of Statistics …

（3）三选一

1.the numberprice rate of+主题词has increased decreased by了 to到+数字.

2.主题词takes up accounts for+数字（百分比）.

3.there are __% sb(not) doing sth.

注意，也可以这样写第三句：

数据表达句，+surveyed +组织名称.

There are 70% individuals owning private houses, surveyed Sina.

【本文由陕西文都教学研究院独家名师吴扶剑提供】