时间:2017-12-14 来源:文都教育
正面现象类
第一段:
总描:Not until I see this caricature/picture, do I realize the magnitude(gravity) of主题词/句子: the fact that….Let’s look at the picture in detail 细描(人、物、话)
“人”的描写办法:
sb. is doing sth(,doing sth),
“物”的描写办法:
There is/are+sth+with a/an/a lot of+人或物+in/on/at under/around/besides+地点…
“话”的描写办法:这里的“话”指的就是图片中的“文字”,分两种情况:
① 会翻译:The caption/title in the picture reads that+文字翻译
② 不会翻译:The caption/title in the picture indicates that+主题句
注意:图画中的文字是用来直接或者间接的说明主旨的,因此如果不会翻译可以说:图画中的文字暗示了“主题”。
第一段结尾或第二段开头(如果前面已经在提到主题句了,那么这句话后面就不要写主题句了。)
Common as it at first glance, this picture is brimming with illumination after your serious pondering. The drawer aims to reveal that 主题句.(寓意)
第二段:现状+这样做的好处+(万能引用+万能举例)+不这样做的坏处
现状: In contemporary society, individuals in growing number are conscious that _主题_is indispensable for both personal and social purposes.
利:Possessing this virtue/quality/value/notion, one can not only_动词词组_,but also _动词词组_(Apart from this ,it is conducive to _名词_. Just as a celebrity once said:“万能引用”.+万能举例
万能利弊模板素材:
动词短语
容易成功
achieve success/victory/triumph more easily
加强沟通
enhance and increase communication
减少遭受到失败和挫折的几率
reducing the rate of suffering from failure and adversity.
获得成就感/满足感/幸福感
Acquire the sense of achievement/contentment/happiness
得到他人的尊敬
obtain respect from others
享受良好的人际关系
enjoy harmonious interpersonal relationship.
建立成就、创造财富、为社会做贡献
Constitute/establish achievement, create/accumulate wealth and make contribution to our society.
取长learn from other’s strong points
补短offset one’s weakness
名词词组
社会风气:general mood of society
可持续性发展:sustainable development of…
个人成长:personal growth
身心健康:our personal mental and physical health
和谐稳定:social harmony and stability
生态平衡:ecological balance
经济发展:economic development
科技进步:technology development/advances
文化交流:cultural exchanges/communication
万能引用:
Life without+主题词 is like sailing without wind.
万能举例
…人或集体……is a case in point, which/who is an excellent embodiment of 主题词. But for this notion/virtue/quality, he/it could never be what he/it is now and enjoy the present glory.
万能引用和万能举例根据情况使用
不这样做的坏处:只写一个
If the significance of +核心词 cannot be realized properly and promptly, (危害一):名词词组+ will suffer a great deal. (危害二)What`s worse, lack of it may pose a potential and looming menace to 名词词组.
第三段:结论+建议+展望未来
Taking the above mentioned into consideration, I reckon that not until we realize the importance of 主题 and put it into practice,can we foster it deliberately and make a better progress. Additionally, 政府/媒体/学校/个人 is also responsible for advocating this理念、价值观、美德/teaching/guiding+sb to do better in this respect. Although it`s easier said than done, we can make it with perseverance/our longstanding effort and stamina
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